How to write like Charles Dickens
Charles Dickens wrote the way a great city sounds: crowded, noisy, funny, and full of people you only met for a second but somehow never forget. Open any of his books and a street fills up in a paragraph — a fog rolls in, a clerk shivers over a candle stub, a fat man laughs himself purple, and every one of them feels alive. That density looks like a gift you either have or you don’t. It isn’t. The teeming Dickens page is built from a small number of moves you can name and copy, and most of them are easier than they look.
Dickens wrote most of his novels in monthly instalments, for readers who had to remember a huge cast from one month to the next. That constraint forged his signature trick: he tagged every character with one unforgettable detail so you’d know them on sight when they came back. Learn that one habit and you have the key to the whole style — the comedy, the crowds, and the warmth all hang off it.
The moves that make the voice
Dickens’s style isn’t a mood you pour over a paragraph. It’s a set of mechanical choices, each one repeatable:
- The character tag. Give each person one repeatable detail — a catchphrase, a tic, a defining object — and bring it back every time they appear. The tag does the reader’s remembering for them. Think of Micawber, forever certain that something will turn up.
- The piled-up sentence. Dickens builds long, cumulative sentences that add clause on clause, detail on detail, until a room or a street feels physically crowded. Commas and semicolons are his bricks. Abundance is the effect.
- Comic exaggeration. Characters are drawn a size too big — the fool is a great fool, the miser a monument of meanness. The exaggeration is affectionate, and it’s what makes them memorable rather than merely real.
- Naming inanimate things alive. Fog behaves like a creature, a door-knocker takes on a face, a house sulks. Dickens hands objects moods and motives, and the world starts to breathe.
- Open sentiment, earned by comedy. Dickens says the tender thing out loud — he isn’t embarrassed by feeling. He gets away with it because the comedy around it keeps the reader from feeling manipulated. Laughter buys the tears.
- Rhythm that repeats. He hammers a phrase or a structure — the same opening returning down a paragraph — so the prose almost chants. Read him aloud and you hear the drumbeat.
None of these need genius. They need a willingness to add where most modern advice tells you to cut. Dickens is the rare voice built on more, not less — and the skill is aiming the abundance so it lands.
Worked example: one paragraph, before and after
Here is a perfectly ordinary paragraph, written the way most of us write by default — efficient, tidy, and completely forgettable:
The landlord was an unpleasant man who was known for being stingy. He kept the building cold to save money and rarely spoke to his tenants. Most people in the building tried to avoid him.
Nothing is wrong with it. It’s just that nobody in it is alive. The landlord is a summary, not a person — “unpleasant,” “stingy,” adjectives with no picture behind them. Now the same content, run through Dickens’s moves — a character tag, a piled-up sentence, a little comic exaggeration, and one object brought to life:
Mr. Grindle was a saving man. He saved coal, he saved candles, he saved words — above all he saved words, doling them out to his tenants one grudging syllable at a time, as though each one cost him a shilling he would never see again. The staircase he kept so cold that the very banister seemed to flinch from your hand, and the tenants, meeting him on it, learned to study their own boots with the sudden devotion of scholars.
The facts are identical: a cold, mean, silent landlord everyone avoids. What changed is that he became a person. The tag is his saving — coal, candles, and then, with a turn, words, which tells you exactly what kind of man he is. The sentence piles up rather than stops short. The banister flinches, the tenants become sudden scholars of their own boots, and the meanness turns funny without turning soft. That is Dickens in one paragraph: not more information, more life.
The same fact, four voices
To feel how specific the Dickens setting is, take one dull fact — “the office was busy” — and run it through four writers:
- Plain/corporate: “The office was operating at high capacity.”
- Hemingway: “The office was busy. Phones rang. Nobody looked up.”
- Twain: “The office was busy as a kicked anthill, and about as productive.”
- Dickens: “The office was a hive without a queen — typewriters clattering, telephones shrilling, a small man with ink on his nose running from desk to desk with a look of permanent apology, and over it all the great clock ticking on, serenely indifferent to the panic it was causing.”
Same fact, four relationships with the reader. The Dickens version is easily the longest, and that’s the point — it doesn’t report the busyness, it drowns you in it, right down to the ink on one anonymous nose. If the stripped-down opposite is what you’re after, the piece on writing like Hemingway shows how much you can cut; and for the plain-spoken American middle ground, writing like Mark Twain trades the crowd for a single voice across a fence.
Why the feeling doesn’t curdle
The great risk of the Dickens style is sentimentality — the tender moment that tips into schmaltz and makes the reader roll their eyes instead of tearing up. Dickens courts that risk constantly and mostly escapes it, and the reason is the comedy sitting right next to the feeling. He’ll make you laugh at a character for pages, and then, having earned your affection through the laughter, ask you to care about them — and you do, because the joke proved they were human first. Strip the comedy out and the same sentiment reads as a manipulation, the writer reaching straight for your throat. This is the same trap that catches earnest online writing: feeling announced without anything to anchor it lands as performance, the way over-sincere captions read as try-hard rather than heartfelt. The fix is Dickens’s: earn the feeling with something honest — usually a laugh — before you ask for it.
A simple workflow to write a Dickens paragraph
You don’t channel Dickens, you build toward him. Draft the plain version first, then run three passes:
- Pass one — tag every person. Go through your characters and give each one a single repeatable detail that reveals who they are: a phrase they overuse, a nervous habit, an object they can’t be parted from. One tag per person, chosen for character, not decoration. Then make sure it comes back at least once.
- Pass two — crowd one sentence. Pick a flat descriptive sentence and let it pile up: add a second detail, a third, a small comic aside, until the scene feels full. Use commas and semicolons to keep it moving. You’re after abundance, not a run-on — read it aloud and it should build, not stall.
- Pass three — bring one thing to life. Find an object or a piece of weather in the scene and hand it a mood. The fog broods, the kettle grumbles, the empty chair waits. One living object per scene turns a description into a world.
The mistake beginners make is piling up everything at once, so the page becomes exhausting rather than alive. Dickens varied his rhythm: a crowded sentence lands harder when a short one follows it. Add on purpose, and give the reader somewhere to breathe.
When writing like Dickens is the wrong tool
The style is gorgeous and almost always the wrong choice for daily writing. Its whole engine — abundance, delay, comic detail — is built for immersion, and immersion is the opposite of what a busy reader wants from an email, a status update, an instruction, or a summary. Pile up clauses in a work message and you don’t sound literary, you sound like you’re wasting someone’s morning. The same goes for anything that must be precise and scannable: legal terms, medical or safety instructions, a report someone will act on in a hurry. There, every extra word is a place for meaning to hide, and the plainer discipline of confident, uncluttered writing serves you far better. Save the full Dickens for fiction, personal essays, newsletters with room to roam, and any place where the reader has actually signed up to be immersed. The one move that travels anywhere is the character tag — even a two-line story about a coworker lands harder when you catch the one detail that makes them them.
The takeaway
Writing like Charles Dickens isn’t about being wordier than you are. It’s a set of small, nameable moves — the character tag that fixes a person in one detail, the sentence that piles up until a scene teems, the affectionate exaggeration, the object handed a mood, and the comedy that earns the feeling. Dickens sounded inexhaustible because he added with intent, tagged everyone so the reader never got lost, and kept the jokes close enough to the tears that neither one felt cheap. Give your people one unforgettable detail, crowd the page on purpose, and let something in the room come alive. That’s the city on the page — the rest is just noise.
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